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I want to sew

I want to sew

That smile into a frown

I want to play

With you all day

And slowly break you down

You fascinate me

You violate me

In ways you'll never know

And so I'll take

This needle here

And I'll begin to sew

Your smile

Your face

Your cold embrace

Your sad and empty world

My fingertips

Will brush your lips

And watch your smile curl

A frown I'll make

And you I'll break

A pretty doll you'll be

And don't forget

That all day long

You'll be here with me
Sing this to yourself, languidly, lazily. Let it roll out softly with wicked intent.

Enjoy my lovlies.
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Mechalith Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2005
I love it... it calls out to both my sadistic side, wanting someone to sing it for... and *ahem* the tiny masochistic side of me that would love to hear it sung TO him.

Either way....
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SurgicalAddiction Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2005
I loved writing that piece, because it was written as a song. I still need to record it sometime, but I don't know quite what I'll do with it. I have the melody down, but it would be lovely to have some accompaniment.
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jaxraven Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2005
That. Kicks. So. Much. Ass. *worship and adoration*
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SurgicalAddiction Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2005
:blush: thankyou...
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MacDougal Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2005
It sounds very lulling, if it were to be spoken. It would make an awesome lullabye. Beautiful.
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SurgicalAddiction Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2005
Thankyou. I love to sing this piece, it's great. Sorry about the late reply. Been busy lately.
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MacDougal Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2005
Yeah, I know, what with the moving and stuff. Give Tammy a butt-squeeze for me.
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scruffypup Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2005
Very awesome, brings out he masochist in me :) I love the rythm. I particualrly enjoy the way you manage to make something savage sound so inviting >:)
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SurgicalAddiction Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2005
lol, welcome to my sadistic side.


:ninja:
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scruffypup Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2005
It's so beautifull...*ealks into the light and is eviserated* :slow:
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SurgicalAddiction Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2005
^_^
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Tinsel-Wig Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2005   Writer
This is incredible.. So much rhythm and a fantastic concept. :+fav:
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SurgicalAddiction Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2005
Well thankyou, I really appreciate the comments and the favorite ^_^
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Tinsel-Wig Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2005   Writer
Welcome :)
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RavenOfTheWolves Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2005
I LOOVE your poetry! It's so intriging!! PS. Thanki you for favoriting me!
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SurgicalAddiction Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2005
Thankyou ^_^
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kickmeiamadog Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2005
Delicious :P
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SurgicalAddiction Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2005
^_^ yum!
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Crystal-Dawn-Rose Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2005
Very cool
:D
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wylde Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2005
O.O!!

Definate fav. *offers up her frown for defrownification*
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Akanthaville Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2005
I really want to watch "May" now!!

That one just kicks ass.. i mean really!
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SurgicalAddiction Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2005
May will be fun ^_^
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Fairytale-Heart Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice.
x
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SurgicalAddiction Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2005
Thankyou ^_^
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Fairytale-Heart Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2005  Hobbyist Writer
kk :hug:
xx
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